Shinatsuhiko

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THIS RAW STYLE! I tried something different and it was pretty fun working on it, although it isn't super detailed I'm actually quite satisfied with it..but idk if I should do more of these or you like the super detailed ones more

This will be my character I'll be competing in the group and I'm super excited for it. I haven't done her sheet yet but it's in progress and it will only be in Hungarian so I'll write her story here in English in case anyone is interested. /UPDATED -final story/

Her name is Shinatsuhiko, shortly Shinatobe. She is a daughter of the Sorawarisen clan's leader. This family is almost as old as Esras itself. They were one of the first inhabitants and some people even say that they are direct descendants of the first wind magic bearers. The bloodline consists only of humans but they live an unusually long life, but nobody really dared to ask since curious people always seemed to disappear. They have been always loyal to the royal family and the king and helped the kingdom out several times. The Sorawarisen is known to be a very peaceful family. They own an island where many people from all around the world go, since the clan is known for it's exceptional healers.
This harmony and peace lasted for centuries on the island. But since the new clan leader many things have started to change. The new clan leader, Shinatsuhiko's father started charging people for getting healed, there's also a rumor that he has sold his soul and black magic started slowly consuming him.
When Shinatsuhiko realised what dirty tricks does his father use to keep the island inhabitants in fear and what plans he has for the future, she gave up her family name that she 'wore' so proudly before and disappeared.
She was wondering months in the Land of the Mist when she found an ancient abandoned temple that looked like one of the first temples ever build in this land. It was the temple of the Wind. People used to come her to pray and to give their sacrifices to the wind gods, but this seemed a little different than the rest of the temples she's seen before. Years passed and Shinatobe became a resident of the shrine. After a few years she even opened up to the public and healed any person in need. Soon she became well known in the region and many people, even from her home island visited her. Her father was furious, since Shinatsuhiko was healing people for free he lost all his customers.
One day when the Sorawarisen leader has had enough, he sent his son, Shinatobe's older brother, the cruel Fujin to teach her a lesson. He and his companions completely destroyed the temple and blinded Shinatobe. She has never felt evel magic like this, the once so pure winds now were infused with dark magic. She had no chance against them. When her brother left, the place where once a beautiful blooming temple stood was nothing but ruins. She was kneeling there blinded and helpless, but when she tough that everything was gone, she felt a warm breeze on her face. It wasn't just ordinary wind, she couldn't see it, but she knew this was the brightest and most beautiful thing in the world. When she slowly approached the source she palpated a sword-like object. When she touched the katana, something unbelievable happened. She started to 'see'. She didn't get her sight back, but she learnt how to see the true nature of things. This was one of the purest form of white magic, very powerful, but harder to use. This was the magic of the Kamikaze itself.
This has turned Shinatobe's life by 180°. She's decided that she'll overthrown her father and cruel brother, cleanse her clan from black magic and restore peace in the island. There her journey begins, she has to learn how to fight and how to use her magic. In baby steps she must go, overcome many challenges, defeat many enemies and find herself to become a true warrior.          

Name: Shinatsuhiko (Shinatobe)
Age: ???
Species: human
Class: Mage 
Likes: rain, mist, peace, wind, she is very religious
Dislikes: hot temper, cruelty, uneducated and disrespectful characters
Weapon: Her katana named 'Kazenoroi'


This is my idea of her BG story, however this is really raw and I haven't got any permission for having a deity (although minor and really not like super f-in OP or something) buttt still so... her story might be altered, especially about her origins....welp we'll see